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Grade 5/6L
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Below are some of our Figurative Writing pieces. We hope you find them interesting!

I could see the white ball spinning towards me as I was playing. I could hear the loud cheering from the parents on the side lines as I ran past them. I could smell the delicious cafeteria food making me want to run off the court as I was playing. I could feel the pretty ball with hard bumps in my hands as I caught it. I could taste the delicious sausage roll in my sweaty hands as I put it in my mouth.
 * Netball**

Jade Henderson.


 * Fifa 09 D.S **

I could see the disappointed opposition put their faces in their hands as the whistle blew. I could hear the cheerful crowd roaring as I sat quietly on my bed. I could smell the horrible plastic on my D.S as I celebrated quietly. I could feel the comfortable grip on my D.S as I pushed the buttons. I could taste the delicious dinner that my mum was cooking as the smell wafted past my nose. I beat Argentina! By Julian

I could see the golf ball flying through the air as I followed through with my swing. I could hear my silver golf club swing through the air like a sword as I struck the ball. I could smell the freshly cut grass as I walked across the oval. I could feel my golf club vibrate through my arms as I hit the ball hard. I could taste cold air on my tongue as the freezing air wafted around my head. Montana
 * Golf **

I could see all of the different coloured cars driving on the road as I walked along the footpath. I could hear all the tree’s leaves falling onto the cold ground. I could smell the fresh air coming towards me. I could feel my dogs fur rubbing against me. I could taste the smell of the food in my mouth.
 * Talking the dog for a walk. **

Ali BIlney

I could see the powerful Heavy chasing me as I ran. I could hear the giant explosions as my friends got shot. I could smell the hot nachos steaming as I took a bite. I could feel the computer mouse zoom with my hand as I turned around. I could taste the cheesy Doritos that landed on my tongue as I took a bite. Jarrod Paterson
 * Team Fortress 2 **

I could see yellow Bart unscrewing everything in the school as he watched the school fall apart. I could hear the quiet laughter as I watched TV. I could smell all the delicious foods as I opened the pantry to get bread and spreads to make a sandwich. I could feel the soft bread as I made the sandwich. I could taste the delicious sandwich as I put it in my mouth while watching TV. Bryce
 * Watching TV **

I could see my excited cat running towards me as I stepped outside I could hear the soft breeze rustling the trees as it blew past I could smell the coolness of the air as I breathed heavily I could feel my cat's fur rubbing against my legs as she ran past I could taste the delicious mint toothpaste as I finished brushing my teeth Leticia
 * The Morning **

I could see the well wrapped presents as I walked in the lounge I could smell the Christmas lunch cooking asI walked to the alfresco area I could fell the party popping as I walked into the room. I could taste the chocolate melting in my mouth as I sat down I could hear people laughing and having true Christmas spirit.
 * Christmas **

By Jasmine Jerez!

I could see the Extreme Enigma Jeff Hardy as the Fearless C.M.Punk got Swanton Bombed. I could hear the American fans as John Morrison Pinned Edge. I could smell the tasty popcorn as I clapped Cryme Tyme winning. I could feel the excitement as the Hell in a Cell came down to Earth. I could taste the brilliant buttered popcorn as I sat on the couch.
 * WWE Smackdown **

Callum M-H

I could see the sun shine through my window as I open my curtains. I could hear the quietness as I tiptoed through the hallway. I could smell the sweet pancakes cooking on the pan as I walked to the kitchen. I could feel the softness in the pancake as I bit through it. I could taste the sweet syrup on my lips as I licked them clean.
 * The Morning **

by Jassy.M

I could see the soccer ball go past me as I was running. I could hear everyone cheering loudly as I was in goalie. I could smell the hot food as I was running for the ball. I could taste the hot food as I shoved it in my mouth. HAYDYN ORR
 * Soccer **


 * WATCHING AN OLD TV SHOW (DOCTOR WHO) **

I could see the bad computer effects as Sylvester McCoy’s face winked. I could hear the plastic Daleks as they screamed EX-TER-MI-NATE! I could feel my sweaty hands as they shoved biscuits in my mouth. I could taste the tart biscuits as I chewed them to bits. I could smell the yummy chicken as it was cooked by Mum.

Luke Drohan

A scurvy........ A painful horrible death. A heart breaking disease. A lake of vitamin C. A disease for all ages. A sickness of the past. A pantry with no fresh food. A disgusting sight. A rough and bumpy mouth. A dark purple, grey mouth. A long lasting disease. A fearful disease. A dreadful experience.
 * Scurvy**

Jade Henderson

Google Sketchup
House - By Jarrod

Environment - Jesse

House - Julian

What do you like best about school Podcasts
Abby

The Economics we had this year was fun. We had to work in shops. I worked as the Treasurer and then later I became a Banker. Mitchell, Julian, Jarrod, Owen and I worked very well in a group and we split the work among ourselves. We could probably improve the banking system by printing off more money, printing off more sheets and be a bit more Organised. I would change the Banking and Treasurer system a bit and although we get payed more I would change from a Banker to a Shopkeeper. I would also change how much money the Government workers get payed.The shop system and the learning how to handle money properly part.

Callum M-H